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Ezra Weston's avatar

I love the way you weave self-improvement messages into poetry. It's really hard to do without sounding preachy or shallow, but you've figured out how to avoid both of those pitfalls.

Twisted Prusti's avatar

It’s a fine line ain’t it. I appreciate it.

Luna M Hiraya πŸ’«'s avatar

β€œThe days still come at you like hired men.”

Ugh, love this βœ¨πŸ’«

Twisted Prusti's avatar

Thank you I appreciate that

Ethereal Twilight Poetry's avatar

This is a wonderful piece Prusti. 🫢

Twisted Prusti's avatar

Hell yeah much appreciated

MoTy's avatar

β€ža man

who’s finally stopped negotiating with his wounds.” - self portrait?

Twisted Prusti's avatar

Fuuuuckin right