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Madeline Muzika's avatar

She sounds like a wicked dream.

Ramona Moth's avatar

stunningly written, the ending is perfection.

Twisted Prusti's avatar

I appreciate that, thanks for reading.

MoTy's avatar

Admire the ending. So very twisted you!

Twisted Prusti's avatar

That is how I roll 🥃

mena's avatar

this was an incredible reading experience, the end was so good oh my!!

Twisted Prusti's avatar

Thank you I appreciate that.

Willow's avatar

'She rewired my heart like a vending machine' 🖤

Twisted Prusti's avatar

Glad you like the line

Written After Midnight's avatar

There’s something unsettling about this

in the best way.

It feels less like a story about a tenant,

and more like a story about presence. About intrusion. About who really belongs in a space.

The tension sits quietly beneath the surface.

Beautifully restrained.

Twisted Prusti's avatar

I’m glad the unsettling feeling shone through, absolutely deliberate

Written After Midnight's avatar

It shows.

That quiet control is what makes it linger.

Ask a psychopath's avatar

“Dragging her nails along my windpipe…” love it!! 🖤

Twisted Prusti's avatar

Thank you I am glad this hit the spot

B Philippe's avatar

Bloody hell. Incredible writing!

Twisted Prusti's avatar

I appreciate that 👽